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well here it is...this due tomorrow so let me know what you think...its about an interview with a local super hero. but what the interviews perception and what is reality are two differnt things.


(note:ext= exteriorshot...int interier shot...(off) said off screne..the above is what is going to be shown when (off)is used ms...medium shot

EXT:DAY:
Enterence to apt building.


interviewer and crew is standing outside the door buzzing the door to waiting to get in and get the interview over with. the door buzzes them in and they knock on the door to the apt.

interviewer

are you Arachnid lad?

Arachnid lad: a out of shape person with a wife beater shirt on and boxers; points to his shirt. the shirt says : yes i cam Arachnid lad hard to believe isn't it?

interviewer

ohh never mind then.
Int: of apt

crew goes into the appt the interview takes place on a couch.

interviewer
sorry we are an over an hour late. equipment troubles.


Arachnid lad just shrugs shoulders like it dosnt matter or even realize or care about the time. he looks like he just woke up himself.


interviewer
what does it take to be a super hero.

Arachnid lad
there is physical training.

ms of Arachnid lad jumping into the pool and doing a lap

interviewer (off)
like swimming

ecu of kiddy pool and Arachnid lad�s toe going into the pool. (ms) taking it out and acting like its too cold to go into. Shrugging shoulders he goes in and can�t even swim in such a little area.

Arachnid lad (off)
yes

ms reading the canadian criminal code of canada


interviewer (off)
you have to be frimilliar with current events and laws i guess?


(ms) him looking at a time magazine only to have the mag turn sideways and a centerfold drip out and a playboy mag appear


Arachnid lad (off)
you have to know what's going on out here




ecu of Arachnid lada's face

interviewer (off)
what have you done for the city recently?

ecu of Arachnid lad's discussed face.

Arachnid lad
i have done lots for the city. infact i saved the world recently.


ecu of interviewers face with a look of amassment

interviewer
you? you saved the world?

ms over the shoulder shot of Arachnid lad playing a video game and beating it. with the words game over

Arachnid lad (off)
yes i did

FADE TO BLACK

well here it is...this due tomorrow so let me know what you think...its about an interview with a local super hero. but what the interviews perception and what is reality are two differnt things.